Max stood on the promenade deck; he was leaning with his
back against the railing. His hand holding a red pen, writing along the
margins of the script.
Damn, these hacks couldn't write worth beans. He
was constantly changing things, adding colons, fixing up the words here
and there, and changing the details to make things more cohesive and
clearer for the audience.
"Finished yet?" Simon said as he approached. He
was carrying two cups of coffee and offered one to Max. "You've been
out here for over an hour. I figured you needed this."
"It's not easy
turning crap into gold," Max replied as he put the cap on the red pen
and clipped it to the page he was editing. He accepted the cup and took a
pull from it.
"What's the scoop?" Simon inquired. "We shooting this
scene today or not?"
"We're three days late as it is," Max replied.
"Logollos is dancing around the producers," Simon said. "He's working
his magic in order for this movie to be finished on time."
"Christ, we're over budget as well," Max said. "I hope to hell this
doesn't end up as another Heaven's Gate fiasco."
The ship chugged along
the river as Max took another pull of the coffee. "Here comes The
Professor now," Simon said under his breath.
"Are you finished with the
changes, Max?" The Professor asked. He was dressed in a windbreaker and
had on a baseball cap that read Cube Productions. "We need to shoot the
next few scenes now before the weather changes again. The lightning and
the weather is a good mood-setter for this."
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